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Join date : 2013-03-24
Age : 27
Location : In many different lands...Feudal Japan, The Land of Ninjas, Old England, The World of Demons, Exorcists, and Angels...Oh the many places I am part of!!! I wish right now however that I lived in Japan...Or even Korea!

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PostSubject: Break Down   Break Down EmptyFri Jun 28, 2013 10:29 pm

Wounded and weary
I fall to my knees
Crying, you hear me
But pay me no heed
I bleed from the outside
Shatter and break
Nothing, I can't hide
For my life's own sake
The cuts become crimson
My tears freeze over
This world is my prison
And Death is my lover
I scream out for mercy
But no one will listen
Dear Lord forgive me
I just can't take it in
One final gasp
A cry for redemption
A hand for me to grasp
As I fall into oblivion
Once more I die
And become black inside
"Father forgive me!" I cry
But the rules I don't abide
I wish it was over
And I was six feet under
Don't cry when I'm gone
For I won't need your tears
Breaking down, you see me
And ignore my pain
One of these days
You will feel the same
And when that day comes
I won't be there for you
So you'll scream and cry
Just like you left me to do
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Join date : 2012-11-09
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Break Down   Break Down EmptySat Jun 29, 2013 11:13 am

The thread that bind,
Never to be broken,
Cords of love and admiration,

Though the miles grow,
We connect to you,
Our threads of data, strings of hope,

For what is stronger than love from a distance?
Our hearts tie to you,
The thread that binds.

I'm terrible at poems so I'll just stop there. We love you, Navi. You have a 'smile' for everyone. You're funny and such a pleasure to talk with. You have a beautiful heart. You're a shining example of what's right in the world.
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Join date : 2012-11-09

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PostSubject: Re: Break Down   Break Down EmptySat Jun 29, 2013 12:03 pm

The body is weary. The soul has grown weak.
The world has worn us down
We seek, desperatly, to find the meek
But only end up further underground.
I call out for you, the last one I know
Only to be met with a frown
Darkenss inside growing steadilly louder until all falls to silence.
It is only so-so
Why must I care?
But it will always be my burden to bare....
Things come and they go. We live and we die.
But why must this happen? Why why why!?
Until all fades to silence....
If it could have been stopped, I must have been able
Yet I still cling to the world "love"
A crimson horse forced into a rotting stable.
The world has worn us down....
Once you've seen its eyes you may never look away
A hand without a glove.
A cat, once stray.
A king who's found his crown.
Then all faded into silence....
To share pain would be a pleasure
Alone, it is a chore
If you're a dove, I found your feather.
I hold it forever more.
Even after you've flown away where I can never go
Just to face the pain I will never know.
And then all has faded into silence....
The likes of which I can only wait to know.
That day my body withers and my soul turns hollow
And the world has worn us down.
I'm sorry if it's not good. I havn't done too much poetry. I only hope that, if nothing else, it at least helps somebody somewhere.
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Join date : 2013-04-09
Age : 26
Location : England, Midlands.

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PostSubject: Re: Break Down   Break Down EmptySat Jun 29, 2013 12:14 pm

Last day of winter
Dark clouds weave the season’s shroud
Mourning raindrops fall.
Where the spirits mix…
Steam from a Budweiser plant
Shades an old graveyard.
Eleven long years
Since the world went up in flame…
Memories still burn.
Names carved into walls
Crosses in foreign graveyards
Freedom isn’t free.
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