Lizzy_the_Neko
Posts : 673
Join date : 2013-03-24
Age : 32
Location : In many different lands...Feudal Japan, The Land of Ninjas, Old England, The World of Demons, Exorcists, and Angels...Oh the many places I am part of!!! I wish right now however that I lived in Japan...Or even Korea!
 |  Subject: Broken Soul, Broken Future Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:15 pm | |
| What is the future
But an unknown time and space
the future could mean several years from now
Or just seconds from this place
My soul it wanders
Dark inside, wondering if I'll find the light
Broken in pieces
And crying out, I've finally lost myself in the night
Wandering slowly, across the gray land
The light never shines, it's always the same
My soul and my heart, begin to bleed
As they tear into pieces, because you never came
Your promises mean nothing
Your words are all fake
No matter what you say to me
It wall end up the same
So please leave me
Alone in my world of darkness
And walk away
Like I know you, you could care less
My soul is broken
My future is torn in two
Bleeding soundly
All because I fell in love with you
What is the future
But a mystery?
A darkness in space
But it's not meant for you and me
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Chronos
Posts : 415
Join date : 2012-11-09
Age : 27
Location : R'lyeh
| | Subject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:28 pm | |
| It's very chilling and mysterious. Love the passion put into this. | |
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Vulkan
The Adowibbible One
Posts : 580
Join date : 2012-11-09
Age : 27
Location : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:42 pm | |
| very nice...im not usually that fond of serious poems, but i certainly like this one.
excellent job. | |
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Lizzy_the_Neko
Posts : 673
Join date : 2013-03-24
Age : 32
Location : In many different lands...Feudal Japan, The Land of Ninjas, Old England, The World of Demons, Exorcists, and Angels...Oh the many places I am part of!!! I wish right now however that I lived in Japan...Or even Korea!
| | Subject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:46 pm | |
| Thanks....but it's how I'm feeling at the moment...so it's a true one.... | |
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Rorschach
Posts : 34
Join date : 2012-11-09
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future Sun Apr 28, 2013 8:12 pm | |
| *hugs Lizz* A great poem, such a shame that it comes with such a cost as your pain... | |
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