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Lizzy_the_Neko

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PostSubject: Broken Soul, Broken Future   Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:15 pm

What is the future
But an unknown time and space
the future could mean several years from now
Or just seconds from this place

My soul it wanders
Dark inside, wondering if I'll find the light
Broken in pieces
And crying out, I've finally lost myself in the night

Wandering slowly, across the gray land
The light never shines, it's always the same
My soul and my heart, begin to bleed
As they tear into pieces, because you never came

Your promises mean nothing
Your words are all fake
No matter what you say to me
It wall end up the same

So please leave me
Alone in my world of darkness
And walk away
Like I know you, you could care less

My soul is broken
My future is torn in two
Bleeding soundly
All because I fell in love with you

What is the future
But a mystery?
A darkness in space
But it's not meant for you and me

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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future   Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:28 pm

It's very chilling and mysterious. Love the passion put into this.
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future   Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:42 pm

very nice...im not usually that fond of serious poems, but i certainly like this one.

excellent job.
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future   Sun Apr 28, 2013 7:46 pm

Thanks....but it's how I'm feeling at the moment...so it's a true one....
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Soul, Broken Future   Sun Apr 28, 2013 8:12 pm

*hugs Lizz* A great poem, such a shame that it comes with such a cost as your pain...
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