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Lizzy_the_Neko

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PostSubject: The Lost Angel   Thu Apr 04, 2013 7:27 pm

There is a lost girl in the world
Can you see her? I can
Standing alone,
Wondering what she did wrong.
To make mommy yell,
to make daddy leave.
To be left here in the dark.
There is a lost angel in the sky.
Can you see her? I can
Her wings billowing around her,
Tears are flowing down her face.
The light no longer shines,
the world no longer sees,
The broken hearted
There is a lost puppy, in the rain
Can you see him? I can
Shivering in the dark,
Cold, and hungry.
Wanting a home,
and somebody to love him
Why are we all so blind?
Can't we see those 'round us?
The less fortunate,
The poor, the broken.
Why do we just stand there,
when the little girl cries,
or the puppy needs a home?
Who will make the first move?
There are some lost souls in this world.
Can you see them?
.............................................

I can




Note: I wrote this poem when I was in 6th grade! Awesome huh? I got an award too, from the college here, Carl Sandburg.
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PostSubject: Re: The Lost Angel   Thu Apr 04, 2013 7:50 pm

This poem reminds me of song that I enjoy. here it is if you are interested.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5AkNqLuVgY

Give Me Your Eyes

Looked down from a broken sky
Traced out by the city lights
My world from a mile high
Best seat in the house tonight
Touched down on the cold black top
Hold on for the sudden stop
Breath in the familiar shock
Of confusion and chaos
All those people going somewhere,
Why have I never cared?

Chorus:
Give me your eyes for just one second
Give me your eyes so I can see
Everything that I keep missing
Give me your love for humanity
Give me your arms for the broken hearted
Ones that are far beyond my reach.
Give me your heart for the ones forgotten
Give me your eyes so I can see
Yeah
Yeah

Step out on a busy street
See a girl and our eyes meet
Does her best to smile at me
To hide what's underneath
There's a man just to her right
Black suit and a bright red tie
Too ashamed to tell his wife
He's out of work
He's buying time
All those people going somewhere
Why have I never cared?

Chorus

I've Been there a million times
A couple of million eyes
Just moving past me by
I swear I never thought that I was wrong
Well I want a second glance
So give me a second chance
To see the way you see the people all along

Chorus (x2)

Chorus

[In Background]
Give me your eyes!
Lord give me your eyes!
Everything, I keep missing
Give me your arms!
For the broken hearted!
Give me your arms,
Lord, give me your eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: The Lost Angel   Thu Apr 04, 2013 8:09 pm

I've heard that song before! I love it too :)
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PostSubject: Re: The Lost Angel   Thu Apr 04, 2013 8:14 pm

Lol, just learned how to play it on the guitar even though I've known it for years. Its actualy really easy.

One of these days I might record myself so you can all hear my caterwaling
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PostSubject: Re: The Lost Angel   Thu Apr 04, 2013 8:15 pm

awesome :)
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PostSubject: Re: The Lost Angel   Fri Apr 05, 2013 10:34 am

awesome poem!
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PostSubject: Re: The Lost Angel   Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:42 pm

thanks! I try :)
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